Suzie Sterling lives in a strange and beautiful place, and because of her magical grandpa she has to balance between school and the world of the supernatural.

Ch 2: Another Chick in the Mall - Page 8

20th Apr 2020, 2:59 PM

Ch 2: Another Chick in the Mall - Page 8

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JitterbugJive

JitterbugJive 20th Apr 2020, 2:59 PM
The page was bothering me so much that I went ahead and fixed it >_< You can find the old version here: https://www.patreon.com/posts/36208091
The way the three frames at the end were before left the whole scene kind of scattered and confusing and there was a lot of empty space. also the backgrounds were too saturated so I fixed that too.
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20th Apr 2020, 3:10 PM
Xel_Unknown
This is an improvement
20th Apr 2020, 10:33 PM
Goldenzeal
oh no mood swings.
KarToon12
21st Apr 2020, 5:16 PM
KarToon12
I agree. This new page looks much better.
Sovember
21st Apr 2020, 7:06 PM
Sovember
I like this page it has great composition and flow :D