Ch 2: Another Chick in the Mall - Page 8
20th Apr 2020, 2:59 PM
20th Apr 2020, 2:59 PM
The page was bothering me so much that I went ahead and fixed it >_< You can find the old version here: https://www.patreon.com/posts/36208091
The way the three frames at the end were before left the whole scene kind of scattered and confusing and there was a lot of empty space. also the backgrounds were too saturated so I fixed that too.
Want to see pages early and exclusive bonus content? Consider supporting my Patreon!
https://www.patreon.com/mymagicgrandpa
The way the three frames at the end were before left the whole scene kind of scattered and confusing and there was a lot of empty space. also the backgrounds were too saturated so I fixed that too.
Want to see pages early and exclusive bonus content? Consider supporting my Patreon!
https://www.patreon.com/mymagicgrandpa
Rate this comic:
average rating: 5
This is an improvement
oh no mood swings.
I agree. This new page looks much better.
I like this page it has great composition and flow :D
Comments: